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Re: Don't Let Go
No punctuation? Think it over - if you use the right kind of variety it can help to make your flow even better! Sorry I can't give any advice on ...
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Re: Impossible
Hmmm it's a nice feel good poem but it's a bit garbled in the sense that you squash a lot of words into the lines and it messes with the ...
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Re: saved
I dont see much of a haiku in there really - I'm not an expert in the field but I like to read them because they can pack so many ...
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Re: Across the Sky
Wow - In this I didn't think about images as such. I thought a lot about how it would sound if it was a piece of music. And wait for ...
Mar 2, 2009
