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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Don't Let Go

    No punctuation? Think it over - if you use the right kind of variety it can help to make your flow even better! Sorry I can't give any advice on ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Impossible

    Hmmm it's a nice feel good poem but it's a bit garbled in the sense that you squash a lot of words into the lines and it messes with the ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: saved

    I dont see much of a haiku in there really - I'm not an expert in the field but I like to read them because they can pack so many ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Across the Sky

    Wow - In this I didn't think about images as such. I thought a lot about how it would sound if it was a piece of music. And wait for ...

    Mar 2, 2009


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